I don't even know lol!

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Post by PiperC! on Tue Dec 07, 2010 3:52 pm

into the tree
she waits
and into the tree
she goes

you never know
what folds
or unfolds

never see it coming
never saw it left

the sound of voices falling
the sound of the voices breath

angels in the stairway
angels burning down

wings alit
and calling

wings to be found

I open up the doorway
step into the street

magenta coats a calling
and for the coats I bleed


Do you guys get anything from this? I've been writing a lot lately about waiting, and trees, and angels, and sinster voices and colors. But they've been coming out fast and are rather unbecoming. The poem I posted earlier came from the same place, as well as the poem I wrote and gave unfinished to my cousin for her birthday (yeah, this is ALL I can write about, couldn't even squeeze out a funny poem for her), and a short story I started months ago. It is just like I have a vision in my head that I cannot express.
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Post by PiperC! on Mon Dec 13, 2010 1:13 pm

Dude, I finally wrote a poem separate from this. Yay.
I'll post it later after I edit it a bit.
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Post by Hannah_Banana222 on Mon Dec 13, 2010 4:35 pm

Singular dude? Not dudes? It's almost as if you assume I'm the only person who reads these things. Razz
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Post by PiperC! on Mon Dec 13, 2010 8:03 pm

Well, who knows? You seem to be our little resident reader. Razz


Pshh, it would have been weird to say dudes anyway. Have you ever heard anyone say that in your life? LOL
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Post by Hannah_Banana222 on Tue Dec 14, 2010 5:36 pm

Yup. I've read everything people post here (with the exception of super long novelly stuff). You guys take the time to write and post it. The least I can do is read it. Smile Which isn't a problem, as we've yet to have a sucky writer around here.

And YES! Out of my own mouth. You think I'm weird? Sad
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Post by PiperC! on Fri Dec 17, 2010 8:04 pm

Yes. Yes, I do think you are weird.


But that's okay, we all are around here.
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Post by Hannah_Banana222 on Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:11 pm

Good. I don't trust the normies. *looks around suspiciously*
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