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Post by PiperC! on Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:01 pm

She, as Persephone,
waits
longing and wistful
billows of hair,
once curled
going limp

She, as Persephone,
is trapped inside,
under, beneath
the wills of others,

and she, as Persephone,
waits

. . .

just a child,
trying to please
and trying to prove
what she feels
is it real?

the mind's oppressing
of body and soul
she, as she feels,
is she real?
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Post by Hannah_Banana222 on Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:51 pm

Epic. I don't know if I've ever told you this, but you're a great writer. If I don't comment on your stuff, it's usually because I'm so far beneath you that everything you say goes way over my head. LOL. But yeah. This is really good. Very Happy
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Post by PiperC! on Sat Dec 04, 2010 2:28 pm

That is so sweet Hannah. But I have no idea how anything I say could go over your head. You are a smart cookie! Very Happy
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Post by Hannah_Banana222 on Sat Dec 04, 2010 3:19 pm

Hehe. Thanks. Smile You just write a lot about Greek mythology, and I'm not very familiar with it.
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